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Rough Cut Feedback:
A good range of scenes, no floating legs.
Good stuff, animations are a bit simple, work on detailing shots.
More detail into the scenes, good transitions and multiple shots instead of a single camera shot. More detail on Maya segments and Animation to go with the 3D segments.
Lots of cuts – works well. Timed well. Visually interesting.
Very varied animation and scenes. Flows well.
Add the audio of a school bell ringing.
Has a lot of things going on. Could have something happen in the bathroom and kitchen.
After receiving my feedback I am going to work on the 3D parts of my animation and redo some less detailed Adobe Animate parts such as the vase and penny and dollar sequence.